Playing around a little bit with the format of the comic... But mostly because I didn't want to keep drawing that one long shot of the room. yay for talking heads! And yeah... Had almost exactly this conversation.
Yeah, I messed up the splits. The dialogue bubbles were supposed to overlap the center lines to show that they are just spatial, and not temporal splits. (IE, they’re not separate panels, still read everything top to bottom.)
5 thoughts on “A Safe Workplace”
nocara
the order of the last four panel is quite confusing
Fox
Yeah, I messed up the splits. The dialogue bubbles were supposed to overlap the center lines to show that they are just spatial, and not temporal splits. (IE, they’re not separate panels, still read everything top to bottom.)
Sorry!
nocara
Worry not, it was just a constructive criticism
SaveOftenX3
Her sleeves changed color in panel four/5 idk which one
Fox
Yup! totally missed a fill tool there! I’ll fix that!
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