CAMPING TRIP <$N>
CHARACTERS:
Fox, Rai, Drake, Bethany
MOUSEOVER TEXT:

PANEL <1>
Bethany giving a dramatic sigh/eye-roll. Drake leaning in.
DRAKE
You’re “camping?”
BETHANY
I’m supposed to be over at Sarah’s “camping.” But it’s just sleeping in a tent in her back yard!
PANEL <2>
Bethany in the foreground, hands up/exasperated. Fox in the background, looking at Rai in shock/embarrassment.
BETHANY
It was SO boring. So I left.
FOX
And came to a bar?
RAI
Fox loves camping.
BETHANY
Yeah. My friends are here.
Why are you here?
PANEL <3>
Everybody looking at Fox. Fox embarrassed.

PANEL <4>
Fox hunched back on the bar, defeated. Bethany beaming.
FOX
My friends are here.

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Camping Trip

Fox has had a good time camping... And definitely does NOT want to talk about it with Bethany... Drake and Rai are having way too much fun with all this chaos. I had a lot of fun trying to capture the physicality of Bethany trying to be all adult, but still having some doubts. In particular her catching her tail in the first panel felt real "Ok, are thy buying it? Am I in trouble?" to me. ^.^

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