PANEL
Fox leaning on the bar, listing a bit to one side, pointing at Rai. Rai sarcastically surprised.
FOX
I ‘unno if you can tell... But I’m already a lil dunk.
RAI
Nooo, really?
PANEL
Fox motioning to order another drink, Bethany walking up behind.

PANEL
Drake entering, Bethany mounting a stool next to Fox.
DRAKE
Hey Fox. Hey little B.
DRAKE
The usual?
FOX
Yeah
BETHANY
Yeah

PANEL
Drake setting down a couple shots. Fox leaning away from Bethany, towards Rai, looking worried.
FOX
Hey... How drunk am I?

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Postgaming

Fox is not prepared for Bethany. Ok, so this set of comics started out with a script I sketched out a few months ago... But it got WAY too dark. I got to the point where I lost the comedy in it. Dragging Fox into it, I hope, gives us enough of an outside perspective to avoid my earlier pitfalls. Does that come across as too oblique? :: shrug :: I'll share where it got dark later. But for now, enjoy!

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